Comments on: Haiku / Senryu Contest

By: I Am

I Am — Tue, 14 Jun 2005 21:15:28 +0000

I strongly agree with boywonder. Those were excellent. There are AT LEAST two I probably would have selected. If I can come up with something, I hope to have another contest of some kind next month. I hope you’ll participate.

By: boywonder

boywonder — Tue, 14 Jun 2005 20:57:55 +0000

shadeofblue, it’s too bad you were late, because those were wonderful haikus. You would have taken the cake.

By: shadeofblue

shadeofblue — Tue, 14 Jun 2005 17:05:31 +0000

I found yours v funny I Am. Alas too late for the contest, but here are some of mine nonetheless…

Minds are deflowered.
The boy at twelve is the man.
Priests get there first.

“Whence cometh evil?”
Asked long dead Epicurus.
Curious remains.

“We can’t all be wrong!”
They chorus in a fool’s song.
But alas, they can.

What they believe in
is an accident of birth.
Why can’t they see this?

“Sell all but your shirt”
He said. But they pick and choose.
Call that following?

By: Seth

Seth — Sat, 11 Jun 2005 19:26:55 +0000

wait….wait….yes, that’s divine inspiration I’m feeling:

The Bible’s missing
A page, ripped out long ago:
“To my wife Susan”

By: Seth

Seth — Sat, 11 Jun 2005 01:34:30 +0000

Somebody help me
(a dyslexic agnostic):
Is there a real dog?